Human Resources & Payroll – Improving Services and Operations
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Please amend this report to reflect the comments that have been added to the attachment named “report with comments “.
Also from the this comment You identified a major area of concern within your organisation that is to integrate the HR & Payroll systems your justification for the improvement is mentioned further on. There are 2 issues one is that you have not used the key assessment criteria given in the Assignment brief and your Introduction does not interpret the assignment brief (see comment D2)
You have not really related to the assignment brief you discussed the SWOT analysis strengths and weakness in great detail – this would tie in with the Measurements and Improvements section. You can discuss the potential new system in your organisation but you should have discussed it under the key areas I have outlined below, as I was looking for you to address the following areas with citation and/or support. o Measurement and improvements – examples are the transitional process, typology of operations, KPS’s benchmarking etc
o Project Planning – I am looking for the characteristic of a project, example Gantt chart (implementation plan) etc. o Skills & considerations – resource considerations, skill development Please make sure you use the following headings in the contents page as well as any other you see fit. Introduction ( This needs to be the really the question turned around for example this report focuses on an area of concern within your workplace that requires improvement. Measurement and improvement Project planning Skills and considerations Recommendations Conclusion
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